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Did do a Skype call with tom wasnt sure how i could post the audio file so here is a transcript:

Me: so man what do you think i could do to improve the front page any positive or negative points? 

Tom: well you obviously need the images but i do like the idea of a fish eye, i think it would really go with the model you picked and the... well genre that you've picked. Ummm well im not sure if its my screen but your background looks a bit grey rather than black, im just saying as i think you wanted black. I love the erm text at the top great use of words to get the "Muse" bit in, little things like that realy stand out to me the black space well i dont think that will be a problem at all once.

Me: yer i was thinking that about the background didn't know if it was just me ether how about the contents? 

Tom: hmm have a look at the color code for it, right lets have a look. Ummmmm..... i really think that the text could co with being a little smaller, not the once on the pictures but the others, as i think professional seem to be smaller and have alot more so add some more man , apart from that just tighten it up a bit especially the second page the gap between the columns just looks to large.

Me: how about double pages

Tom: That rip effect is pretty awesome man love it, your missing the pictures but.... remember add the title to your second double page spread apart from that i like how you used lots of columns rather than just 2 on a whole page.